Groomed
Rolling migraine
Fixated under
Colour graph of red
Colour scheme
Of passion and rage
Laying on a spine
Of a rose
A platform of thorns
A slumber of beauty
Constructed a cardio spiral
Watchtower of the heart
Firing at
Open flowers
And valentine card sharpeners
Your eyes heart shaped
Fluxing at each blink
Metaphors to age
Kissing the hem
Of his wear
Dreams
Permissions of fate
Worst case scenario
It spectre
Materializes
And becomes
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Of passion and rage
Laying on a spine
Of a rose
A platform of thorns
A slumber of beauty
My favourite lines.... *cries*
And for your information, it's kind of against the rules to like... what was it... , leet?
I mean 2 chat like this cuz itz annoying. How r u btw?
cheers for all the pos feedback i wish i could put it in2 a competition i just dont know where i can if ne1 can help wiv that
I agree with "Until it sleeps" you're a genius, you should really consider entering your work in a contest.
you r a genius i love your stuff lets hope for more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
feel free 2 post your ideas